Hi this is my first time doing a haiku writing. It only has to be 3 lines going like 5.7.5 syllables and its a traditional in Japan .
Winter is the best
You can have a snowball fight
I like ice skating
I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi this is my first time doing a haiku writing. It only has to be 3 lines going like 5.7.5 syllables and its a traditional in Japan .
Winter is the best
You can have a snowball fight
I like ice skating
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Your words made me wish is was winter time.I like the idea of ice skating.
ReplyDeleteHave you ever been ice skating Ayani?.
I look forward to reading your next post Ayani.
ReplyDeleteI am looking forward to checking out your next post Ayani.
ReplyDeleteAll the best for the last week of school Ayani :)
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